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CupcakeMan
@ Thursday, October 1st 2009, 8:59 PM
Mujaki
@ Friday, October 2nd 2009, 1:14 AM
Oooh, enjoyment a'plenty!
Maldraek
@ Saturday, October 3rd 2009, 3:31 AM
When's she gonna show up so I can "enjoy" her?
*drool*
a
@ Sunday, October 4th 2009, 11:44 PM
Overall, this is good (especially like the lineart) but her arm (at least the one that is entirely visible) looks disproportionately thin to me.
CupcakeMan
@ Monday, October 5th 2009, 7:58 AM
Random Fearsome Lurker
@ Tuesday, October 6th 2009, 10:53 AM
Personally, I thought that while the breast looks bright and perky, it juts out rather unnaturally. With her back to us, I imagine you would be able to see less of it unless she swiveled towards us.
But those are some sweet sheets.
Another Random Fearsome Lurker
@ Tuesday, October 6th 2009, 3:23 PM
I agree with the comment above... though she is swivelled a little, so maybe the breast just seems too low on the ribcage to me.
I love the brush strokes and shading, though, and the expression is great.
Otori
@ Monday, October 12th 2009, 12:22 AM
I envy your ability to draw feet and make them look so natural. I'm unsure about the arm, it seems too short in addition to being too slim. We should see less of her back if she were turned that way, I think it's just the position of the shoulder blade. Overall I like it a lot, her expression is interesting, not sure if she's annoyed or pensive.
CupcakeMan
@ Monday, October 12th 2009, 7:49 AM
Spirit
@ Monday, October 26th 2009, 9:16 AM
Her shoulders/shoulderblades are placed too high. Since you started sketching bottom to top, the sketch looked fine until the shoulders began to appear. That's what's throwing off the breast as well as the torso looking weird. Might also be why it was so hard to fix the arm. :3
But other than that, I do love dat ass. :o Yum.
CupcakeMan
@ Tuesday, May 18th 2010, 8:21 PM
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Anyways, hello again, friends~. OR SOON TO BE FRIENDS. I probably don't know any of you.