Shi practice, trying to learn the ropes with layers and shit. Iv never used layers in my art, but im gunna start, it seems easyier.

Your picture is very cute..I love those boots..

The lines are a bit rough... But I really like the colors in her hair. Especially the purpleish bits that look like the undermost hair was dyed separately. There's a neat depth there.

This picture just strikes me as kind of blah... like, the lazy background is kind of a bummer when it looks like she's clearly sitting on something, and the lack of effort in the hair/boots. This could be cool, it looks like you have some talent hiding under there, bring it out--spend some more time on it. I like her outfit and it looks like you had something going with the hands.

Actually, I love it how she is sitting on nothing. The coloring is great! Loving the pose. I guess her laces could have been better. But it is still amazingly nice!

I agree with Erie, there are many color bleeds and the lineart seems rushed. I do like the character design and her posture though. A bit more time and this picture has amazing potential, you have a lot of talent in you, and I'm sure I'm not the only one eager to see it ^^'

i really wish you'd put more effort into your drawings. i'm sure you're capable of so much more. for example, the fact that the feet, boots, and laces are so rushed can really distract the eye from the rest of the picture.

I agree with everything that has been said here. It's cute though.

i like the solid colors and writing

Listin...guys, i just clearly said on my this picture that its only practice xDD; Iv never really used Shi(besideds using watercolors) and I was practicing with it, its not like i only draw on this oekaki, so you havent seen all my stuff. If you dont like me expiramenting(or drawing at all here) i'll just do it elsewhere, no big deal i guess... But thanks for the comments, it really helps :] Ill try working on my line art and such.

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