Hiyo Fearsome, long time no see.

Haven't done anything art related in about a year, oekaki in ~2, so many apologies if this pic is terribad, the color pallet is very... pale. >< Not sure what I was going for other than practice. Enjoy.

This is a great idea, but I think the product could have been so much better if the woman's face and shoulders were more worked on. Besides that, the only thing wrong is her shoulders seem kinda funky... great idea, but I think it's better to submit finished pieces...

I think it looks just fine. The pale palette works well with the subject, gives it a very soft, dreamlike quality. Finished pieces don't always have to look hellaciously complicated; the simplicity is nice to see.