=_= I'm going to sleep now.

Oooh, enjoyment a'plenty!

When's she gonna show up so I can "enjoy" her?

*drool*

Overall, this is good (especially like the lineart) but her arm (at least the one that is entirely visible) looks disproportionately thin to me.

I agree. I tried to fix it a few times, but I eventually gave up, aha.. Thanks~

Personally, I thought that while the breast looks bright and perky, it juts out rather unnaturally. With her back to us, I imagine you would be able to see less of it unless she swiveled towards us.

But those are some sweet sheets.

I agree with the comment above... though she is swivelled a little, so maybe the breast just seems too low on the ribcage to me.

I love the brush strokes and shading, though, and the expression is great.

I envy your ability to draw feet and make them look so natural. I'm unsure about the arm, it seems too short in addition to being too slim. We should see less of her back if she were turned that way, I think it's just the position of the shoulder blade. Overall I like it a lot, her expression is interesting, not sure if she's annoyed or pensive.

Thanks, guise. *o* Yeah I know her arm is small >< I re drew it a butt ton of times but I couldn't figure it out. I eventually got fed up with it. :x As for her breast, you're right.. I hadn't noticed how low it was. Her whole upper torso looks odd to me now. It's not an angle I've done before, so I dunno. And I was trying to make her a little swiveled towards us, but it didn't work out too well I guess haha~ And yeah, Otori, I was going for an annoyed look. Like, 'how long are you going to make me sit this way? >:C '

Her shoulders/shoulderblades are placed too high. Since you started sketching bottom to top, the sketch looked fine until the shoulders began to appear. That's what's throwing off the breast as well as the torso looking weird. Might also be why it was so hard to fix the arm. :3

But other than that, I do love dat ass. :o Yum.

Ahhh... That helps alot, actually. Shoulder blades kick my ass, and it is apparent. Thank you!