please point out any anatomy flaws, it would be even lovelier for a redline...? just a quick sketch. ten bucks to anyone who can decipher my handwriting! ;)

I see something about sleeping with fishes... xD -takesoutreadingglasses-that's about it... I love her pose! <3

knees aren't that pointy, feet curl down awkwardly, even if it's hooves, the bones are arched oddly. breast area immediately below the armpit should not be a closed circle as the tissue actually connects from the lower pit area into the breast. also, its placed too high/ mid body. the arm-shoulder region is too far into the back; the line should stop a bit more in onto the side. the face tilts oddly away from the body. basically the neck seems 90 degrees. i love the shape for the stomach here, and the hips. (cuz u asked <3)

well thank you
even though it hurt

but thats only because it was thorough and well meaning and too many people sugar coat it. i appreciate honesty :)

Wow.... That was harsh for critiquing. The point is to be respectful not to be a total butthead... Besides not all art forms have to be completely anatomicly correct.... That's what makes art so great, the diversity. :)

Ask for critique, receive critique. Tiamat was completely polite.

I agree, there was nothing harsh or mean about that critique. I can't really figure out the face, the lines are a little sloppy in that area. I'm a big fan of sketchy lines but when they take away from the features it starts to be detrimental to the piece. With some cleaning and tweaking this one could be great! I love her big hips

Tiamat was thorough and blunt, but accurate. Nothing disrespectful there. It shows he took the time to look over the drawing thoroughly.

tiamat was exhaustive and critical, yes, but very well spoken and very helpful. didn't leave anything for anyone else to constructively criticize, heh heh!

since i know i'm dead blunt about critique, i never offer it unless it's clearly asked for. You can never grow as an artist if all anyone ever says "this is nice" and etc. Critiques exclude opinions, but i even added the things i appreciated here. Btw, i'm a girl XD i stand by what i said needed work, and the parts i said i liked.

I think that this picture is beautiful, and not because of whatever perfect art shit there is about it. I looked at it and liked it. I can see your potential, and the only real advice I can give you is to keep drawin' and fuckin' with shit. If you pay attention you can figure it out. Jimi Hendrix wan't born knowin' how to play guitar.