EDIT: Retouched picture =)
Hello - I've been a stalker of this place for a couple of years, and finally signed up.
These are my alien characters, Xou and Christopher. I might be drawing them the most here..
Any tips? His back was making me angry.
I know I could work on this longer, though that risks the picture being too big, and I lost many pictures that way on other oekaki's =( just by working on it too long.
Even though I'm 20, I still feel a little embarrassed making these type of pictures. >_>;

i loooove the curve of his lips :9

I think he looks like the better character..but the whole picture is nice..and I must agree about the lips...super sexy.:)

Saucy! No need to be embarrassed! I think this is a fine start, but I'd like to see more definition overall. This looks half-finished to me. I'd like to see some separation from the background, more detail on the female character and so-forth. You don't need to leave the applet open for the total duration of the picture. You can safety save if you think you might have worked for too long, and go back to it later. I'd like it if you'd retouch this picture and add a little more clarity. It has potential.

I agree with Gendaru, I think even a simple dark green outline in choice spots would sharpen this up brilliantly.

Thanks! I worked hard on his face to get it that way it is.. and will refine her face.
And Thank you guys for the tips =)