This is my first contribution to ANY Oekaki board... I had a difficult time with the program... but for my first try, I don't think it turned out half bad. but I'll keep practicing for sure. There are a lot of things I need to work out. It's not NEARLY as sexy as I wanted it to be.

Interesting! Ordinarily when someone gets accepted with no oekaki experience, their first post is a painful exercise. Usually, they are gratified to be accepted and post a quick, awful 'hello fearsome!' picture with an anime face and a swirly background. Some people who have drawn loads of oekaki do this anyways. It's very pleasing to see an acceptable image fitting with the theme of the board in this situation. Keep up the good work, use your head on what you post to the board and everything should be peachy.

I think the title makes this piece. It turns it from casual sex to meaningful love-making. And I adore the cute little peener, though I think it might be a bit anatomically incorrect. Small is fine, it just seems to be of a strangely tiny width. I love the stylization of the woman's curves. Very pleasing to the eye. These two remind me almost exactly of a friend and her boy. =)

Raine, haha, well... I made a mistake on the size... It really is ALOT bigger than my drawing in real life... Plus, being on this board for only a few weeks... I don't think I'm quite ready yet to draw gigantic penises quite yet... :) but I'll get used to it. Thank you for the kind comments!

Everything wrong with this save for the anatomy errors will be fixed through experience with the drawing applet. Keep at it! I like their faces a lot.

Oh! I remember seeing your androidy graffiti drawing on Facebook for that last robot contest! Welcome to Fearsome!

your first try is simply exceptional. the anatomy is wonderful, so is the colouring and poses. but for some reason my favourite part is the girl's profile. anyhow, good job, congratulations; can't wait to see more.

Like me, right Gen? lol.... I think there are some things that could be improved with this but overall I like the mood.

tiny penis is tiny

I have to agree with everyone else, this is REALLY great for a first-time oekaki! ( Mine were god awful.) You'll get better, just keep on trucking and I can't wait to see what you produce!